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Exquisite Corpse Critiques


Mike

What I Liked: Very calming, meditative, and straightforward

What could be better: more blending of sounds maybe

Interpretation: Seemed like someone going about their day, or snapshots into someone’s life


Rob

What I liked: Clean and crisp

What could be better: More layering could be helpful

Interpretation: A stressful day full of schoolwork, then finally release


Alki

What I liked: Great use of ambience + rhythm

What could be better: More variation/buildup

Interpretation: Sound selection and repetition definitely feels like waterboarding


Jeremy

What I liked: Varied sound selection and cool effect work

What could be better: Could be more cohesive and less random

Interpretation: Chaotic events in a person’s life


Julia

What I liked: Sounded very realistic, felt like I was immersed in a day in the life of a mom

What could be better: Maybe more variation in the background

Interpretation: A mom going about her busy life while trying to calm down a fussy baby


Hannah

What I liked: Very relaxing and realistic at first, then I love how it turned creepy as we progressed through the piece

What could be better: Maybe add some slight hints of creepy elements in the beginning so we know what’s coming as foreshadowing

Interpretation: Going for a hike in vast nature that then goes wrong


Caden

What I liked: Nice sound variation and realism with a hint of sketchiness

What could be better: More layering/background ambience in some parts

Interpretation: Someone with crippling asthma makes a delicious breakfast but sounds scary in the process



Garrett

What I liked: Conveyed stress very well using layered sounds

What could be better: More buildup

Interpretation: I wake up for a long day of classes and studying in a post-apocalyptic society


Tasia

What I liked: Felt like a day in the life with work but nice periods of relaxation

What could be better: More effects could have been utilized

Interpretation: Typical day as a student


Brendan

What I liked: Cool sound selection

What could be better: More cohesiveness to add emotion

Interpretation: Someone was thirsty while doing work


Jordan

What I liked: Good use of reverb and ambience, as well as buildup

What could be better: More clarity in the plot if that makes sense

Interpretation: A normal day starts getting weird


Jake

What I liked: Very playful, engaging, and trippy

What could be better: I wanted a more full soundscape as the trip peaks

Interpretation: An exposé on the dangers of peer pressure


Maggie

What I liked: Crisp and clean

What could be better: More cohesiveness to create emotion

Interpretation: A person leaves their family to go on a winter voyage


Anjeli

What I liked: The realism was potent and palpable

What could be better: I wanted more action

Interpretation: Someone goes for their morning coffee and gets some work done in a Cafe


Dzifah

What I liked: Sounded very realistic

What could be better: More variation and effects

Interpretation: Someone makes food and drink in a busy kitchen


Michael

What I liked: Very chill and relaxing

What could be better: More ambience, layering, and variance

Interpretation: An artist creates a piece on a Sunday afternoon that features the color purple


Meghan

What I liked: Good sound selection and interesting

What could be better: More ambience and layering

Interpretation: Someone escapes mundane life and ventures to the sea


Gavin

What I liked: Great texture and atmosphere

What could be better: More of a plot

Interpretation: Someone gets into a shipyard and experiences the lively environment after a long journey at sea


Jacob

What I liked: Creative and engaging, somewhat funny

What could be better: More fullness in places

Interpretation: Someone takes a bong rip that sends them into the stratosphere


Sarah:

What I liked: Great sections with different upfront elements

What could be better: More clarity and variety

Interpretation: Someone is in the void


Calvin:

What I liked: Great ambient noise and effects

What could be better: More depth and build in the second half

Interpretation: This piece does exactly what it intends to do, simulate narcolepsy, so nice work


Alan:

What I liked: Stimulating and frenetic

What could be better: Almost too frenetic in some points, wanted more cohesiveness

Interpretation: Sounded like a chaotic experience


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